i graded my self and i got a 32/40



Digital Storytelling Rubric


Project by:Danielle Derenzo 


Graded by:danielle derenzo


CATEGORY

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FOCUS

Point of View - Purpose

Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout.

Establishes a purpose early on and maintains focus for most of the presentation.

There are a few lapses in focus, but the purpose is fairly clear.

It is difficult to figure out the purpose of the presentation.

FOCUS

Point of View - Awareness of Audience

Strong awareness of audience in the design. Students can clearly explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.

Some awareness of audience in the design. Students can partially explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.

Some awareness of audience in the design. Students find it difficult to explain how the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.

 

Limited awareness of the needs and interests of the target audience.

 

CONTENT

General

Photostory contains 10+ pictures and appropriate music/narration

Photostory contains 8-9 pictures and appropriate music/narration

Photostory contains 6-7 pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate

Photostory contains 5 or fewer pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate

CONTENT

Images

Images create a distinct atmosphere or tone that matches different parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/metaphors

Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/ metaphors.

An attempt was made to use images to create an atmosphere/tone but it needed more work. Image choice is logical.

Little or no attempt to use images to create an appropriate atmosphere/tone.

ORGANIZATION

Sequencing of Information

Graphics & story line are organized in a clear, logical way. The story is easy to follow.

Most information is organized in a clear, logical way.  One picture seems to be out of place.

Two or more pictures seem to be out of place making the story difficult to follow.

There is no clear story.  Pictures seem to be sequenced randomly.

STYLE

Voice - Consistency

Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the presentation.

Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the majority (85-95%) of the presentation.

Voice quality is clear and consistently audible through some (70-84%)of the presentation.

Voice quality needs more attention.

STYLE

Voice - Pacing

The pace (rhythm and voice punctuation) fits the story line and helps the audience really "get into" the story.

Occasionally speaks too fast or too slowly for the story line. The pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation) is relatively engaging for the audience.

Tries to use pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation), but it is often noticeable that the pacing does not fit the story line. Audience is not consistently engaged.

No attempt to match the pace of the storytelling to the story line or the audience.

STYLE

Layout

Layout is exceptionally creative and visually appealing.  The fonts, color, and background all work together to provide a consistent theme and a presentation that is easy to view/read. 

 

Layout is creative and visually appealing.  The fonts, colors, and background almost provide a clear theme. It is generally an easy presentation to read and follow.

 

Layout is visually appealing although some slides may be too cluttered or too empty.  The fonts, colors, and background do not necessarily provide a theme and there may be parts that are difficult to view/read.

 

Layout lacks visual appeal and is sometimes too cluttered or too empty.  It may be confusing at times.  The fonts, color, and background do not work well together  in the presentation making it difficult to view/read. There may be too many types of fonts, etc.

 

CONVENTIONS

Grammar

Grammar and usage were correct. 

Grammar and usage were typically correct, and errors did not detract from the story.

Grammar and usage were typically correct, but errors detracted from story.

Repeated errors in grammar and usage distracted greatly from the story.

CONVENTIONS

Pictures/Graphics

Images are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary

 

Most pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary

 

Some pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary

 

Most pictures are not clear and are not in focus

 

 

 

Total Score  ___32___40 points

 

the air plane crash  that changed my life and that killed  my friend and also 583 other people and crew members that was on the KLM 4805 flight and the Pan Am flight 1736 

the morning of March 27 1977, i drove my friend to the air port and we waited for a couple of hours when my friend borded the air plan i was about to leave but i stoped at Mcdonalds  and thats when it all happen.  my friends was on the KLM flight 4805. In an attempt to move Pan Am 1736 off the main runway, controllers instructed Grubbs to turn onto taxiway 3 (although taxiway 4 would have been better logistically to set up for takeoff). In any case, the weather was deteriorating. Grubbs was unfamiliar with Los Rodeos and had trouble locating the correct taxiway in reduced visibility.Van Zanten, in KLM 4805, had gassed up and was maneuvering toward takeoff himself. He was aware of the Pan Am jumbo, but had no visual contact. He asked for takeoff clearance and was told to stand by. Whether he misheard the instruction, or ignored it, van Zanten proceeded to go. What he didn't know was that Pan Am 1736 was taxiing down the runway directly toward him, still looking for its assigned taxiway.i think he missed heard the instruction cause why would any one take a chance like that.As the cockpit voice recorder later revealed,pan am  spotted the KLM jumbo's landing lights through the fog and screamed to Grubbs, who tried to steer his plane off the runway. It was too late.KLM 4805, at full throttle and lifting off, struck the other plane just aft of the starboard wing. Propelled by its forward momentum, the Dutch plane rose to an altitude of roughly 100 feet before nosediving into the runway and exploding in a fireball. Pan Am 1736 also burst into flames and broke into several pieces. Most of the survivors from that aircraft were seated forward of the wings.All 248 people aboard KLM 4805 were killed. On Pan Am 1736, seven of the 16-member flight crew, along with two company employees and 61 passengers, survived, although nine later died of their injuries. Grubbs was not among the survivors. if there was not a bomb scare at the airport that pan am 1736 was supposed to be this wouldn't have happen and my friend would still be alive with all the other people.



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I love all kinds of animals and i like helping people so i like when you can train an animal to help some one. i thinks training animals is a good idea for all different kinds of reason if someone lives alone and is in a wheel chair and they cant get certain stuff a dog might be able to reach it. I think animals have a way about them where any one could just fall in love with them. 

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CSI Global Technology
Digitales Evaluation Rubric

1.
Story Title (hyperlink story title to website) :Rivers Know This 
Author:

Category                                                 Grade                                                            Criteria                                                  
 content knowledge                          exemplar                                           
text communication                          developed                                           Word choice is powerful
                                                                                                                              

Voice/Sound Communication              exemplar                                             emotional mood                                                                         

Image Communication                       exemplar                                           Images were good 
2.
Story Title (hyperlink story title to website) : Tired and Exhausted 
Author:Shelby
Category                                                 Grade                                                            Criteria                                                  
content knowledge                            developed                                        the info was interesting 
text communication                            developed                                      word choice is acceptable
voice/sound communication                exemplar                                          emotional                               
image communication                        exemplar                                       meaning to the topic 

Story Title (hyperlink story title to website): Lost and found 
Author: Jody Sailor
Category                                                 Grade                                                            Criteria                                                  

content knowledge                            exemplar                                            understanding the topic 
text communication                           exemplar                                              the words were powerful 
voice/sound communication                 exemplar                                             emotional and the tone was like powerful 
image communication                         developed                                            Relevant and supportive of topic’s message                                         

for my future i don't really know what i want to do i have so many dreams like i wanna be an animal cop and i also want to help kids with disability.I love animals and i know people and kids with disability there's so many different kind of disability and i know lots of them can be difficult for everyone they might need help and if there is not a human that can be with them all the time animals can. Some animals can be train for stuff but some cant i know there's lots of dogs that are trained animals don't have to be trained i know that no matter what animals can be a good friend for people. I know for my sister she love my dogs and even know that they where not trained and she had epilepsy and died from it she still love them no matter if they could or couldn't tell her that she was about to have a seizure.After my sister died when i was little i wanted to be near my dogs all the time they give me happens and i like helping people and kids with disability if i never grow up with my sister having epilepsy i probable wont want to help anyone and just play with animals but now that my family went through hard stuff when i was in middle school it gave me a different attitude. Animals give people love even though they don't speak they show you in a different way and they give people hope.